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Dolón atrapado por Odiseo y Diomedes. Museo Británico (Photo credit: elaios2008) |
Oswald condenses 150 lines of
Homer (the Doloneia) into 17, and includes pretty much everything essential. (since she isn't interested in
Odysseus or
Diomedes). She's skipped ahead 2 books, but nobody has died since Archeptolemos in Book 8: in the end of Book 8 the Greeks ran back to their ships,
Book 9 is the embassy to
Achilles, and Book 10 begins with the night councils. Finally two scouts sent out by
Agamemnon, Diomedes & Odysseus, meet the scout sent out by Hector,
Dolon, and Oswald picks up at the death scene.

I haven't been saying much about the death scenes, which are the whole point, or so I thought the first time I read
Memorial. Here Oswald begins with the mourning of women ("What was that shrill sound/Five sisters at the grave/ Calling the ghost of Dolon"), tells remarkably compactly the story of Dolon, "ugly but quick", caught by Odysseus and Diomedes and desperately telling them everything he knows, where the Trojans are, where the allies are, where
Rhesus and his beautiful chariot and armour and wonderful horses are, offering a ransom, offering anything, and then they kill him anyway ("And was still pleading for his head/ When his head rolled in the mud"). She doesn't mention Odysseus or Diomedes; here as frequently elsewhere, the identity of the killer is not what
Memorial focusses on.
The simile, of the fly that keeps coming back to bite some more no matter how often it's warded off, is initially from the battle over the body of
Patroclus (again);
Menelaus is given the courage and persistence of an especially irritating fly by Athena. This simile is transferred to the persistent and irritating Dolon, who however gets squashed.
This is the first place where I've found Homer's use of a simile a little more interesting than Oswald's, only because giving Menelaus the courage and persistence of a fly - meant positively - is so counter-intuitive; where describing Dolon, who does keep trying, desperately, over and over, to save his own life by telling them absolutely everything, and in Homer as in Oswald is both pathetic and contemptible, an insect in his little ferret-skin cap, it's an obvious comparison. Perhaps I'm missing something.
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